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The proliferation of so-called cyber squatters…GMATPrep

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The proliferation of so-called cyber squatters, people who register the Internet domain names of high-profile companies in hopes of reselling the rights to those names for a profit, led to passing the Anti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act in 1999, allowing companies to seed up to $100000 in damages against those who register domain names with the sole intent of selling them later.

What does this question test?

This question tests your capability to select the choice that communicates the intended meaning of the sentence in the most effective manner. Ā It also tests your understanding of the modifier errors pertaining to the use of noun modifiers – which modifier in this case.

What does the sentence mean?

This sentence presents the following information:

  1. Proliferation of cyber-squatters led to passage of an act ā€“ Anti-cyber-squattingĀ consumer protection act.
  2. This act was passed in 1999
  3. After this act was passed, the companies were allowed to seed up to a certain dollar amount in damages against the cyber-squatters.

What are the errors in the original sentence?

This sentence has idiomatic error in the expression ā€“ led to passing. Ā The correct expression is ā€œled to the passage of xyzā€.

The sentence uses the –Ā X led to passing Y.Ā  This expression is not idiomatically correct.Ā  It should be ā€“ X led to the passage of Y.Ā  Consider a similar example:

The flood led to damaging the houses. – Incorrect
The flood led to the damage of the houses.Ā  – Correct

Answer Choice Analysis

Choice A: Ā Incorrect: Ā Idiom Error as explained above

Choice B: Incorrect:Ā Modifier Error: Ā ā€œwhichā€ modifier appears to modify ā€œ1999ā€, whereas it should modify ā€œthe Protection Actā€. Ā Note here that we cannot consider ā€œAnti-Cybersquatting Consumer Protection Act (ACCP Act) in 1999ā€ as a noun phrase and hence we cannot say that ā€œwhichā€ modifier modifies ā€œACCP Actā€. Ā This is because ā€œin 1999ā€ is not associated with ACCP Act. Ā ā€œIn 1999ā€ describes the timing of ā€œpassage of actā€. Ā Thus, from the structure of this sentence, ā€œwhichā€ modifier modifies the closest noun ā€œ1999ā€ and hence is incorrect.

Choice C: Correct

Choice D:Ā  Incorrect

1: Ā Meaning Error: Ā The intended meaning of the sentence is that the proliferation led to the passage of ACCP Act. Ā This choice changes this meaning, implying that the proliferation led to the ACCP Act. Ā Notice the difference between the result ā€“ passage of act vs. act itself. Per the original sentence, the act might have been present before 1999, but it was passed after the proliferation of the cyber-squatters.

2: Ā Pronoun Reference Error: Ā The antecedent for pronoun ā€œitā€ is ambiguous. Ā From the sentence structure, because ā€œitā€ is the subject of an independent clause, its antecedent is the subject of the preceding clause ā€œproliferationā€. Ā But this does not make sense since logically ā€œitā€ refers to the ACCP Act.

Choice E: Ā Incorrect: Ā Similar errors as in Choice D.

What are the key take-away messages?

  1. Correct answer choice should communicate the meaning as intended by the original sentence.
  2. ā€œwhich modifierā€ (like other noun modifiers) modifies the closest noun nless a noun phrase precedes it and it does not make sense for it to modify the closest noun.

Where can you find more information?

The concept of noun modifiers modifying slightly far away noun is discussed in detail in the concept titled ā€œModifiers ā€“ Relative Pronoun Modifiersā€. Ā This can be accessed by e-GMAT customers in Level 2. Ā GMAT Like questions in which incorrect choices change the intended meaning of the sentence are covered across all 9 application files and exercises in UGE.

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